Gave all the type some structure, tying into the natural grid of the image itself, and directed the eye to a flow of motion. Also pushed the type back in the center so it would not compete with the vibrancy of the sunset.
Got rid of the border, cleaned up some type...
Here I reduced the type amount, and the size as well, taking care to not intrude into the Rabbi's shadow, while reinforcing the feeling of the pillar that he is leaning on.
I like the playfulness of the type here, but am I trying too hard with it?
Cleaned up the bottom, alluding to the sand/grit feel of the beach, and found a better way of including her name.
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